Listen to the ocean singing her songs of the sea
Look at the tide as it washes over me
Get lost in the notion this is where you belong
Dance below the moonlight to that tropical song.
Bid farewell to the city you dont need her anymore
What more could you ask for? Do you need anything else?
Stay right here forever every boy and every girl
Make it your eternity dont ever leave this shore.
See the lovers hand in hand kissing on the shore
Am I the only one to realise this is what livings for?
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la_spice
- 2008-07-26 @ 17:24:09
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murphymole
Pro - 2008-07-26 @ 19:41:25
Very nice
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Lovely
Just a small point - lines 8 & 9 both end in the same word.
Perhaps line eight could say something like:
Make it your eternity dont ever want for more
I hope you don't mind me saying?
Marian.